My original draft had this bit happening at Amanda's home, and Tehk being hurt to find out Amanda just wanted something from him, but the melodrama of that didn't feel right for Tehk's character. Laughing in people's faces is more of a Tehk move.
He’s a sharp one, that Rahn. -EDIT- So, I decided to take the feedback about Rahn’s dialogue in this strip to heart, and make some changes to reduce the… well, the cringiness. I wanted the Mor’Kama dialect to be more[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
The slang-y speech was originally going to be so dense it bordered on uninterpretable. I chose the path of mercy.