Kind of a second moment of feedback response, on this one. Original draft was Amanda intercepting Selkie here, but Keisha's absence form screen time was mentioned on Friday's comments, and while I had bene intending to work some Keisha and Heather time into the scene while we're in the school setting anyway, it occured to me that this would be a good moment for it. Won't change the end result any.
He’s a sharp one, that Rahn. -EDIT- So, I decided to take the feedback about Rahn’s dialogue in this strip to heart, and make some changes to reduce the… well, the cringiness. I wanted the Mor’Kama dialect to be more[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
The slang-y speech was originally going to be so dense it bordered on uninterpretable. I chose the path of mercy.
