You’re doing a really good job of emulating the writing style of a bright child. In particular, I note her mispunctuation of dialog tags, and her use of telling as opposed to showing (“She was spitting on the floor because she was mad”).
I hadn’t realized it had been so long since I read Selkie.
FB algorithm stopped giving me the reminders.
Glad I’m caught up and that you’re still writing.
Jessie knows there is no such thing as too many cookies.
Leftie, right?
So Amanda’s left-handed? That’s somewhat sinister …
We shouldn’t blame people for using left hand. It’s not right!
Am I crazy to remember Todd is also a lefty?
You’re doing a really good job of emulating the writing style of a bright child. In particular, I note her mispunctuation of dialog tags, and her use of telling as opposed to showing (“She was spitting on the floor because she was mad”).
Be proud of your accomplishment.
Thank you. The punctuation thing required me to unlearn what I have learned. 🤣
I hadn’t realized it had been so long since I read Selkie.
FB algorithm stopped giving me the reminders.
Glad I’m caught up and that you’re still writing.
Did the shape of Amanda’s face change?
Not deliberately, although I may have squiggled the pen a bit too much and accidentally given her cheekbones. Oop.