I considered for a little bit having the bow glimmer as it was replaced on her head. But prior to this the bow hasn't reacted in any way when removed or touched, so that made no sense to me.
Thought about having Selkie speak to the image of her mother in tensei, but it would look weird to have her dialogue translated while the image's isn't. Plus it makes more sense to me that she would be excited and default to the language she's been primarily using for the past three years instead of switching gears on-the-fly.
Then is pronounced with a soft “th” like “threw” and “thought”, and rhymes with “Hen” and “When”
I wanted Then's stealth effect to be subdued and hard to notice because I hate it when stealth effects are portrayed in media by methods that are visible to the viewer's naked eye. Also so he wasn't noticed too early. :P
Just another little post-meeting confrontation. -EDIT- Made some post-update changes to the strip, to fix a little wonky anatomy and make the stealth-agent-i-tentatively-refer-to-as-Waldo a bit easier to see since he was TOO stealthy on this color of backdrop.